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WokeUpOneDay

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Gotta say, the grammatical and spelling errors make it very difficult to get through the game. At one point I began to wonder if it was all intentional because a character said "holier than though" and the MC corrected her by saying "holier than thou". Problem is, the author uses "thou" when he means "though" throughout the entire game! The errors are too numerous, however, to be intentional.

Then there are all the times that someone refers to a kind loved one as if they're constantly perspiring (sweetie versus SWEATY). "I am" is improperly abbreviated as "I'm" far too often. "I'm, I swear I'm." WHAT???

The MC is even referred to as "MC" many times rather than the name you choose. Two-letter words have only one letter. There are too many errors to name here. Write slower and edit your work.

Fix your references to michelle_office_5.webm through _7 (you use michelle_office5_.webm etc.)

Trying not to spoil anything, but how is a girl (Cammy) who has never been able to/cannot possibly tan in the sun supposed to have tan lines?

So much time is spent in the intro getting us to choose between harem and NTR modes, only to say "PSYCH! THERE IS NO NTR MODE!" Just take this out completely! Have two different START choices on the main menu! Don't waste my time! The content is going to be so different anyway that it'll be two different games...

Very simplistic advancement through the game and very easy to miss dialogue because of it. Once I finally got beyond the errors and just went through the story I was able to enjoy it enough.

That is exactly why I could understand that there's nothing tying those two flows together.

I almost balked when I saw the low version number (0.16.2). But then I saw the file size! 125 hours later, all I can say is WOW! Intensely thought out and rich story! Love it!

A11-Y and the cake... awww!

Oh, and the main screen has a "CONTINUE" button that crashes the game if it's never been played before.

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If the first is Kali's then that would make a little sense how it could get out of order, assuming there isn't code that watches the order of events for these. As for the third one, it's the one where they play the racing game with Emma... I think... Like you said there's SO MUCH content!

Moon's story is out of order...

You go bowling with her and Kali and tell her that she has things in common with Moon like... robotics.

THEN you go to her apartment where you find out she did things in robotics and HASN'T MET Kali.

THEN you go to the bar and Moon meets Kali for the first time.

Maybe more... I haven't reached the last of Moon's story for this update yet.

"I'm gonna cum from my ass!"

er... ok...

Decent story but not strong.

I took Sonya, Leah, and Yuki I believe.

It eventually gets a lot worse... (edited for spoilers...)

Later, the Code # acquired message gets stuck.

The thought (moving blue dots) "Although, if it wasn't for her telling me back in the day, I wouldn't be where I am right now..." is stuck in several dialogues for MANY characters. Their dialogue appears in white OVER the top of this thought. I didn't make note of when I first saw it but Daisy's a nurse. I think it's before that.

I do not, but I downloaded for the third time and for some reason it works now. It didn't even show in Task Manager when I ran it before. No problems unzipping any of the times. Can't explain it. Feel free to delete this post.

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Macintosh and Android versions do not run on my version of Windows, so no. Neither the 64 or 32 bit versions work.

Hey, how exactly do you stop "SKIP" besides waiting for input or a major scene change? The ability to stop seems like a good thing to code into your engine...

Good game, but there are a lot of continuity errors.

A whole year in season one (to the day), and the protagonist never has a birthday! It's mentioned once that it's "a few months away", and then the game ends.  (Did anyone but Lucas have a birthday in a year?) Work Mon., Wed., Fri. at the office but skips it regularly (almost always) and does something else on those days without getting fired or mentioned. Have a date with Ruby this weekend? Months later we're still waiting for the long-gone weekend (I kind of get it... season 2). Those are a few.

None of my saves from Chapter 12 worked (properly or at all) with Chapter 14. It gave me the chance to play straight through again, however.

Despite any errors, I'm looking forward to season two! Going to check out the other game as well.

Hope you throw in a hilarious scene of Lucas describing his time with Cynthia! It'd be great to let that poor boy overexaggerate! (Unless he bombed, even with Cynthia ;)